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Offline Diane Amberg

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More poetry
« on: June 22, 2014, 11:22:57 AM »
 A new Haiku.....  Loss of Self and Center

   For what do we cry?
   For the inner sunshine, gone.
   Friends crouch low, hiding.

Offline Catwoman

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2014, 09:03:23 PM »
 :D Good job!!!!!

Offline Diane Amberg

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2014, 03:56:02 PM »
Thank you. Your turn. They are always so well written.

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2014, 09:15:10 PM »
How about another haiku:

When one more word fails,
And anything more is noise...
Dignity is lost.

Offline Wilma

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2014, 10:36:34 PM »
That is very good.  Could apply to a lot of politicians, too.

Offline Diane Amberg

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2014, 09:27:59 AM »
Good one for sure.As Wilma said ,many applications.

Offline Diane Amberg

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #6 on: June 24, 2014, 01:17:28 PM »
     Delightful Sensation

   Stream water sparkles.
   Down the smooth course it hurries.
   Warm cupped hands are chilled.
« Last Edit: June 24, 2014, 06:16:36 PM by Diane Amberg »

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2014, 08:15:13 PM »
 :D Love it!!!

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Re: More poetry
« Reply #8 on: June 26, 2014, 08:24:22 AM »
       A Sweet Treat

   This Strawberry June
   A pink drop escapes the cone.
   My smiling tongue licks.


 

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