Author Topic: I am starting a story  (Read 4993 times)

Offline Cyrille

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I am starting a story
« on: April 15, 2006, 08:46:04 am »
Ok Marshal and Marshal'ette an th rest o y'u cowboys n girls out thar Ah'm 'bout ta start a story thet fur th most part in imagenation, if any of ya'll care ta meet me on th trail  y'u'll be welcome ta ride a peice with me r' all th way if'n thet's yer fancy.
              Cyrille 8)
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Offline Forty Rod

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Re: I am starting a story
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2006, 10:30:49 pm »
Good!!!

I think we have a lot of talent on this wire and if you're willing to get criticized, you can get to where I am....MY BOOK WILL BE ON THE SHELVES IN ABOUT A MONTH!!!

I went over the original last weekend and I had twenty six "editors".  No way I could have done it without them.

Waiting to see what you have.

Hint: write your main character in first person and force everyone else to write in second or third person.  Someday I'll explain why (to my great shame and embarrassment.).
People like me are the reason people like you have the right to bitch about people like me.

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Re: I am starting a story
« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2006, 12:57:15 pm »
Waiting.
People like me are the reason people like you have the right to bitch about people like me.

 

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