Author Topic: It seemed so strange when I wrote it...  (Read 1974 times)

Offline BlackCatBriggs

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It seemed so strange when I wrote it...
« on: November 04, 2011, 09:55:58 am »
But now it seems too flowery. I tried to paint a picture of the timeframe without making it seem like any specific town, just 'out west'. The prose is very broad, and it's a very dry read.

Still, I think it's worth it for the ending.

 

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