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Title: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Dusty Tagalon on February 04, 2017, 08:22:32 am
The GAF flyer was updated & replaced on the GAF website, use the link below to get the flyer.

Dusty


http://www.grandarmyofthefrontier.org/images/GAFflyer2008.pdf
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: River City John on February 04, 2017, 10:47:12 am
Nice job, Dusty.







RCJ
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Sagebrush Burns on February 04, 2017, 10:31:17 pm
Very nice.  I AM impressed!
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Pitspitr on February 06, 2017, 12:27:49 pm
Yes indeed!

Stickied
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Gripmaker on February 26, 2017, 09:47:48 pm
EXCELLENT WORK! You are to be commended on your work and dedication.

LTC Montgomery Little, Senior Chaplain, GAF
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Mustang Gregg on March 05, 2017, 06:35:52 pm
I like it.  Great work, Dusty.
At least we were all in step at the Color Guard.

MG
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: River City John on September 28, 2017, 12:35:49 pm
Just noticed a typo in the second column - there should be a space between ". . .based on. . ."

RCJ :)
Title: Re: Updated GAF recruiting flyer
Post by: Ol Gabe on September 28, 2017, 02:28:53 pm
Aye, and also consider the following:
1. On the Black print side with logo, first paragraph, suggest changing line to read "...or a bit beyond.", adding a.
2. Third paragraph, delete - and replace with a comma to read "...very knowledgeable, the rest...".
3. On the Blue print side, first paragraph, delete 'of' in line "...participating in...".
4. Blue print side, paragraph two, delete 'much' and '-' so it reads "...American and World history."
5. Third paragraph, add period after "...other Nations."
These suggestions are to make it read more smoothly, please use and accept in the spirit intended.
Best regards and good proofing!
'Ol Gabe
GAF #114