"Anachronisem" Feedback - commentary encouraged!

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Please comment.  I want all the feedback I can get.  I have been encouraged to, and hope to publish this when done.  This was begun over on TFS, and continues here.  It starts rather abrupt, as I had not saved the first few entries, and intended to rewrite those anyway.

Winston Dawg:
 Finally! Was having story withdrawal!
  Sorry about Sam.  WD

Stoney Pete:
I did not know this was here.  I sent you an email pard.  You got a real nack for the written word.  You gotta finish this.  I mean this is classic cowboy.  Does he save the girl????????????  Tune in next time.

Well HURRY UP WITH NEXT TIME.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stoney (what's gotta do something at verk) Pete

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Winston Dawg:
 How that for  comment?
Hugs Wd

Brazos Bucky Smith:
Drydock mi compadre,

Your writing matches any adventure, techno, saga, I've read! ;D  As I said in my e-mail, I was of the opinion that it was a published work and I wanted to know where to go get it.  Good luck in getting a publisher, 'cause I want to read the completed work! ;) believe, my friend, I sat and read from your starting to the end of what you have on CAS-City, thats how good I thought it was!

BB ;)


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