I am starting a story

[Cyrille]

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Ok Marshal and Marshal'ette an th rest o y'u cowboys n girls out thar Ah'm 'bout ta start a story thet fur th most part in imagenation, if any of ya'll care ta meet me on th trail  y'u'll be welcome ta ride a peice with me r' all th way if'n thet's yer fancy.
              Cyrille

[Forty Rod]

Good!!!

I think we have a lot of talent on this wire and if you're willing to get criticized, you can get to where I am....MY BOOK WILL BE ON THE SHELVES IN ABOUT A MONTH!!!

I went over the original last weekend and I had twenty six "editors".  No way I could have done it without them.

Waiting to see what you have.

Hint: write your main character in first person and force everyone else to write in second or third person.  Someday I'll explain why (to my great shame and embarrassment.).

[Forty Rod]

Waiting.