So this is the new story. Sort of a rarity in that it's actually finished. It follows a particularly disagreeable soul through the aftermath of a bank robbery. I understand it can also be viewed as something of an allegory, though at the heart of the whole mess is a pretty straightforward horror story.
And as a disclaimer it does contain some violence and language and other unpleasant stuff.
If anybody has any comments, suggestions, horse apples, or questions about gaping plot holes...here's your thread.