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« on: May 07, 2008, 09:51:09 pm »


It a'pears as how you are off to a rousing start, Jack; I look forward to another good read.    Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2008, 03:29:48 pm »

Thanks for the encouragement! 
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« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2008, 08:22:45 pm »

Excellent second installment; waiting with 'bated breath for the next one.  Thanks.  Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2008, 11:48:45 am »

Glad you liked it.  1/4 of the way into #3.
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« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2008, 09:27:41 pm »

Good reading so far. 

Don't make us get out the pointed sticks.   Grin
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« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2008, 10:13:57 am »

You're weaving a mighty good tale here Mr. Jack.  I look forward to more.  And, thanks.
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« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2008, 05:46:53 pm »

You're weaving a mighty good tale here Mr. Jack.  I look forward to more.  And, thanks.

Thanks, glad you like it.  I was wondering if I should keep posting installments here, or just link off to my website?  Don't want to take over the Topic...
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« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2008, 11:05:00 pm »

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I was wondering if I should keep posting installments here, or just link off to my website?  Don't want to take over the Topic...

'Sup to you, but I'd like to see you keep posting here; that is what this part of the board is for.  Take a look at some of the other "Tales" that have been and are being produced here; the collaboration "The Last Patrol" is going to 76 pages, and has been in the fire for a long time.  Other writers have posted their wares here for critique and suggestion, and a couple have gone on from here to be published.  There are a lot of real talented folks using this board, and a lot of us "readers", too.

However, the choice is strictly up to you.
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« Reply #8 on: July 03, 2008, 11:09:31 am »

'Sup to you, but I'd like to see you keep posting here; that is what this part of the board is for. 

Good point.  I'll keep posting.
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« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2008, 09:45:52 pm »

Well, I've finally caught up; another satisfyingly enjoyable episode, thanks.  Please keep 'em coming.
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« Reply #10 on: July 22, 2008, 11:57:10 am »

Working on a blurb:

Straddling the Continental Divide, sits the town of End of the Line.  Abandoned by a bankrupt Continental Railroad, boomed and busted by a local gold rush, the town sits slumbering, forgotten to the outside world.  It is to this almost-ghost-town that Adam Smith Liche is sent by the last wishes of his long forgotten, but recently departed father.  His task?  Nothing less than to save America from the clutches of the Devil.  Armed only with a series of vague prophecies, written by his father before his death, Adam must unravel the various threads of fate that intertwine in this sleepy mountain town.  Success will mean freedom for our great prospering nation, but failure will bring Adam, and America, truly to the End of the Line.

Any thoughts?
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« Reply #11 on: September 19, 2008, 08:18:00 pm »

Thanks for that part 6, Mr. Jack.  New twists and turns abound.  More - More!! Grin Grin
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« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2008, 11:21:06 am »

Thanks for that part 6, Mr. Jack.  New twists and turns abound.  More - More!! Grin Grin

Thanks.  That was going to be the end of the first 'part', but I didn't cover any of the setup for the second installment.  So, two more...
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« Reply #13 on: November 22, 2008, 04:27:20 pm »

Well, I managed to get where I wanted to be with just a 7th story.  That's it.  Thank you, everyone for reading!
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« Reply #14 on: September 05, 2009, 09:37:44 am »

Wal, ya got the startin's of a purty good meal here.  The tatter's are a cookin', but whar's the meat, gravy and bisquits?  Ya need to finish cookin' cause this smell's awful good. Wink
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« Reply #15 on: September 05, 2009, 04:41:12 pm »

Wal, ya got the startin's of a purty good meal here.  The tatter's are a cookin', but whar's the meat, gravy and bisquits?  Ya need to finish cookin' cause this smell's awful good. Wink

Thanks.  I've been working on a zombie novel that's kept me busy.  Sorry to leave you hanging...
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